solarca replied to your photoset: Some stuff from my life drawing class :B I don’t…
it’s weird that you like the first one because the other two show lots of improvement over it definitely! Buyt maybe that’s because I don’t think the face is very squished and I think your additive piece came out pretty great :]~
The first one has some hand sizing issues but seems okay otherwise, whereas the the second one has a weird foot and her cheek is all swollen :I and the last one’s background is pretty screwed and there’s all this gross looking texture coming through because I was running out of paper and it’s near the cardboard back of the newsprint pad. Also the shadows in that one are way clumsier!
If I weren’t so focused on the foot and the face in the second one I think I would like it better maybe? But the fabric in that one is also kind of incomplete compared to the first one.
Thank you :3